Medical Records 101
Problem: INJURY – ARM (FOREARM AND WRIST)
Assess: “Fell off couch & now limited movement, distressed with any attempt tomove (sic) arm. Has croup like cough & black eye from cat. PainStop @ triage.”
From this descriptive triage assessment, we can interpret:
1. That the child fell off the couch, and since that time is acting like a teacup.
2. Becomes distressed when no longer allowed to play that game.
3. Also has a cough.
4. And a black eye from the cat. No need to try to make this funny. That’s actually what they wrote.
5. Has given their contact details as painstop@triage.com
This triage assessment was initially confusing to me, until I read the doctor’s notes:
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Then it all made sense.
Brevity is the key to clarity.
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Ha! I have a growing wariness of our medical system…..and humans……